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Background Pony #C7BE
This is based on a pretty disturbing fic. If I’m not mistaken, that is actually Nightmare Moon making Twilight believe that she is actually Celestia. (I’m pretty sure there was a link to the fic in the description of the image when it was uploaded before.)
Background Pony #9AF9
@Background Pony  
Good point.  
But in this story, I don’t think there is anyone who “ends up fine”.  
You can almost say that the downer ending is (literally) universal.
Twilestia
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
Betrayal! - Betrayed their team for a badge. Shame forever!
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Primo Victoria
@Background Pony
 
Anyone has the right to do what they want, but that does not mean that others have to like it/accept it.
 
He wrote the ending he wanted and good for him, people will always want to change this or that and more then once did i see people changing their endings from what they wanted to what others wanted. And failing because each wanted the “same” but different details.
 
Still i like when there is alternate endings where people can pick what one they want, easy to do for stories you wont continue to build on like in this ones case. But again up to the author.
 
And a happy ending doesnt need to be happy for us and all fine (we know some of the mane 6 died if i remember right), but i just hate the all to common “NNM is OP as fuck and wins without even having a fight”.
 
I hate it simply based on things like NMM being frozen or such for 1000 years while Celestia had time to prepare and such. And we dont even know if they fought at all (i assume that was Celestias backup plan, killing Luna if Twilight cant fix her).
 
Eh i went on a rant here, enough for today xD.
Background Pony #6B19
@Background Pony  
“we have too few downer endings in our fandom”
 
That depends highly on what characters you like. I find that my favourite ones more often than not are killed off, humiliated and/or driven to misery at some point just to “prove” that the story is serious.
 
Yes, sure, Twilight or Rainbow or whatever main character was the protagonist (if not all of them) end up fine, but if there was a fleshed-out secondary in the mix, chances are they got screwed over badly.
Background Pony #9AF9
@d715  
To be perfectly fair, the ending to a story should be the one factor the author should have the right to decide himself (you know, if not any other thing).
d715
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

@Background Pony  
they’re no problem with a sad ending the problem is dude didn’t work for it, it doesn’t feel like it happen naturally, it just happen because the writer wanted a sad ending
Background Pony #9AF9
Good gracious guys, what is it with your constant obession with happy endings?
 
If this story really has a love/hate factor, then I personally love it. The ending was, warts and all, very powerful and convincing. Vimbert took a sad ending to a sad story, and he went with it all the way, milking it for all it was worth. It fit seamlessly with the story’s dark premise…  
As a matter of fact, a happy ending would have felt a little awkward, especially after the other mane charcters’ fates are revealed.
 
In my honest opinion, we have too few downer endings in our fandom. So, this one was actually rather refreshing.  
I cannot believe that some people feel like their time was wasted, just because of the ending. It may have been harsh, but still sating.
Twilestia
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
Betrayal! - Betrayed their team for a badge. Shame forever!
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Primo Victoria
@d715
 
Its not world shattering new, but i honestly expected Vimbert to make it a happy ending, so he surprised me. thats why props not for “omg its so new and never seen before”.
d715
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

@Twilestia  
That’s the problem
 
everyone and their dog things “props for not making a happy end” is new and edgy while its pretty much done to death just as much as “and they lived happily ever after”
 
a downer ending isn’t new or automatic make it a good ending
Twilestia
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
Betrayal! - Betrayed their team for a badge. Shame forever!
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Primo Victoria
Like people said here, i loved/hated it.
 
Its good how it is but yeah, made me feel like shit. You keep expecting a happy end then boom bittersweet bad end.
 
Still props for not making a happy end, but could use a alternate ending thats happy if nothing else. :(
d715
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

@chaos15  
because the whole point of a dark theme is to make the happy end shine brighter
 
a downer ending just makes you feel like you wasted an hour of your life, not helped by up copped out the ending it
Magnetmod

@Arzoo  
I don’t have a mind control fetish and I enjoy the story…/hated. Seriously I have conflicting feelings about the whole thing. It is really well written and enjoy the dark theme. But shivers that ending.
Arzoo

It was a creepy story. Nightmare Moon wins, and tries to turn Twilight into her minion via magic, replacing her memories and such. Well written, but the end was a bit unsatisfying. If you have a mind control fetish it’s hot, otherwise it’s very disturbing at times.
Magnetmod

I love/hate that fanfic!  
Is the best/most horrible thing I have ever read.  
I like/was confuse by the lesbian bit  
10/10 - 0/10  
Really recommend it/Don’t read it