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Broken, they’d told her.
 
Useless, they have called her.
 
Rainbow Dash had faced many challenges in her life, from the bullies in flight school not leaving her best friend alone, to becoming the weather coordinator for a small town an hour’s flight from Canterlot.
 
Nothing would ever be as challenging as this, however.
 
Removing her armored flak vest, Dash opens her locker and puts it away along with her helmet, her boots, and her satchel. Moving a hoof to close the locker’s door, she pauses, eyes pulled to the worn and faded poster taped to the inside of it.
 
Despite its age, she can still see the stoic faces of the Wonderbolts’ looking out at her, their confidant smiles bringing forth one of her own.
 
She had awoken every day for years to the sight of this poster. Every day, she had seen it and her dream to be counted among their ranks, the ranks of the most experienced, most amazing fliers in all of Equestria had been born anew. Had become stronger.
 
So when the war had started, when Spitfire herself had put out the call to arms for all Pegasi. Dash had not hesitated a moment, never thought for a second that joining their ranks to help combat the growing threat in the North would be anything less than the most amazing idea she had ever had. She had been filled with a feeling of pride so complete that she had sworn she might explode the day she had been given her wings, had been made the leader of a combat aerial patrol group.
 
Her smile falters, as in the reflective metal surface of the locker door she spies it. The source of all the scorn, all the hurtful words the other Pegasi tossed at her.
 
Her prosthetic wing.
 
It had not been her first mission, it had not even been her tenth mission. It had been her twentieth, when her ego and the confidence that had defined her for almost her entire life, had made her lax.She should have seen it coming, should have seen the signs of the ambush. Perhaps if she had, she’d still have her wing.
 
And her squad might still be breathing.
 
She could still hear the yell of her second, a Sergeant who’d been with her since they’d both joined up in Cloudsdale. She could still smell the burnt feathers, the rancid smell of the fireball striking her friend, her wingmate, in the chest. She could still feel the sensation of falling as the pain of her wing caused her vision to swim and turn black around the edges.
 
The images flash through her mind as she grits her teeth, trying desperately to get the memories to stop playing. She didn’t want to see their faces! She didn’t want to hear their frantic calls for help over the radio, the answering call of ‘five more minutes’ causing her stomach to drop more than the fall had. She didn’t want to feel the hoof gripping hers as her friend’s smile had started to slip as their eyes had closed.
 
And yet, even as all the images swim to the surface unbidden, causing her to lean against the locker, why can she not remember her friend’s final words?
 
“Command Sergeant?” A voice comes from behind her, causing her wings to snap out, the fiberglass and steel of her prosthetic catching the light and causing the pony who had called over to her to breath sharply.
 
“Yes, Corporal?” Dash replies, looking over one shoulder, unwilling to admit that she can’t fold her prosthetic easily.
 
“Captain needs to talk to you,” the Corporal, a mare, says shakily. Dash chuckles inwardly, as the mare must be knew if she was still gasping at her wounds.
 
“Tell her I’ll be right there,” Dash sighs, looking back at her locker. The mare nods, and runs off.
 
Turning her attention back to the locker, Dash folds her wings, wincing inwardly at the creak her prosthetic makes. She looks one last time at the poster, putting a hoof against it, and smiling.
 
And, in a whisper that she is sure only she can hear, Dash smiles and says the words she’s been telling herself since the first time they’d called her broken.
 
“I might be broken, but they’ve not beaten me yet….”
 
(Story by Epic-Prose (via DeviantArt).)

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Background Pony #7E16
@soundtea  
You ask that like you’re assuming Equestria is going to win.  
In my view, she’s not going to have much choice in what to do once Sombra takes over her country.
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Emily Brickenbrackle III
Just imagining her forcing herself to stay strong in the face of war and injury… my heart can’t do that.
 
Some fight hard. Some fight too hard.
 
Man, I can’t deal with this today.
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Underpable’s stuff is amazing. It’s ingenious and always done with feeling and a unique twist. One of the few I consider to be true artists on this site.
Background Pony #26B9
Rainbow Dash: They’ll break my bones… but they won’t break my spirit.
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@SnoopyStallion  
I’ll confess to not searching more carefully. The reverse image lookup on this site failed to find your image, and I uploaded mine in ignorance of such. The chief differences between yours and mine was that yours was more detailed in tagging, and that mine had a story written by a commenter on DeviantArt (which I reproduced here). I even reported the duplicate manually, asking for this to be merged to yours. Then Mildgyth simply reversed the merge. Again, I apologize.
Background Pony #76D3
Even her cutie mark looks like it’s not quite the same colors. That’s just so strangely unsettling.
 
Very nice work with the scar patterning, too. A____
Meso Echo

Had an older cousin in Afghanistan who had lost his leg permanently from a grenade. I see him in this shape a lot.  
This is really sad, but deep.
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Except when the war’s over, where does she go?
Given that the artificial wing is likely more geared to combat and getting off the ground than stunts, she’ll likely be a weather pony forever.
 
It’s not necessarily need her to be the soldier or a weather caretaker that I said being better, she could still be a vigilante
Background Pony #4A11
@soundtea  
Depending on what the prosthetic is made of, she may not even be able to work with the weather. Lightning and metal don’t exactly mix…
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@DÉLoricGarde  
Except when the war’s over, where does she go?
 
Given that the artificial wing is likely more geared to combat and getting off the ground than stunts, she’ll likely be a weather pony forever.