@Gameplay The Pony
Assuming you are referring
to this
Do you have any questions? Or are you just asking for a general critique?
If you just want a general critique, I’d say you aren’t done. Draw it 10 more times.
Do it over and over and over. Not tracing, but just put them in front of you on a table and keep drawing it. Try sketching, try drawing ovals and squares and then try drawing it as a bunch of cylinders and cubes, then do it as a gesture sketch, keep drawing it until you have 10 of them and your hand is aching.
Then look at all of the different drawings you did of the same thing, and find the 3 that you think are the worse and throw them away. Ignore them.
Then look at the 7 that remain and find the 3 that you think are the best - even if it’s just a sketch.
Ask yourself what makes them “best”? Is it the energy? The easy pose? The fire in the eyes?
Then draw it one more time, using those three as your reference. This is the time for tracing, light tables, transparencies … get a “finished pencil”.
Then ink it.
Then erase the pencil lines.
Now … how does it look?
If you look at the sketch books of mangakas and people who professionally draw, you’ll see that they almost always have some point in the drawing that looks like what you’ve drawn. Because they’re still figuring it out. But they don’t stop there.
So … don’t stop there. Keep going. See what happens.