@Mr100dragon100
Imo depends on your audience and how you would want their reactions to be like. I think approval is key when building an audience. But dont’ let them tell your story.
If you dont want nitpicks then you have to be
consistent but it doesnt have to be realistic or believable. Set the rules early, and that will be the precedents from which all subsequent events will be judged on.
If your story breaks your own lore ppl will find out. Make sure characters dont break lore just so you can tell a story, because then you’d have to go backwards to justify it.
Say for example if ppl think all Alicorns were born, not ascended, then Twilight becoming one broke all kinds of laws, and ppl will nitpick.
If for example ppl think Twilight Sparkle to be the only super-gifted spellcaster because her Cutie Mark itself means magic and also because she’s an alicorn, then Starlight Glimmer the Unicorn consistently showing to be equally as powerful breaks all kinds of lore and ppl will nitpick.
Fortunately in FiM all those “lore” are headcanon and never explicitly stated, so Twilight becoming Alicorn and Starlight being her equal technically
didn’t break anything.
But that’s the lesson: you either set things on stone so you are bound to it, or have it be open-ended so you can be flexible about it later.
But I’m not a writer, so my advice means jack sheit.
Isnt there like a fanfic thread where you can post about this? A thread where writers hang out in?