By “blurb” you mean it’s too much text for a normal description?
I have made a quick search now on game tags and none of them seems to have a description and most of them are green so I presume I’m pretty much the only one worried about this type of details (lol), is this right?
Nevertheless, I’ve made a some typo and grammar mistakes before.
So it would be
“Casual, single-player, action-platformer game with ancient ruins, magic, some sci-fi aspects and a bit of cosmic sub theme.
The story is focused on an organization called The Divisions sending one of their creations, a synthetic unicorn called Horizon, to a remote area in a research on how an ancient civilization had created magical artifacts to give more insight in their magic-infused materials development.”
I think it’s correct now :)
Thank You Again!