Forgot to mention this was done.
I reworded them slightly, let me know if those sound good.
4.- He was born in Mexicolt, moved to Cloudsdale, but finally settled in ponyville, his best friend is Melody Notes, they met by the equal camp, he’s (sort of) an artist, he’s not the smartest guy around, he’s not easily made angry, but when he does get angry, he gets violent… and surprisingly, his favorite food are NOT chips, but he likes potatoes a lot! ||He’s also a womanizer… ||
Although he’s an artist, he also likes to cook.
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