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what do you think about this

this is set in sugar cube corner

*Mrs cake: oooh, what am I going to do?*

*The door rings and derpy opens the door.*

*Derpy: Good evening, Mrs. cake.*

*Mrs. cake: oh, hello derpy*

*Derpy: You need help delivering something, Pinkie told me. What can I send?*

*Mrs. cake:
Nothing.*

*Derpy:
What, did something happen?*

*Mrs cake: I completely forgot about the cupcakes while Pinke was on a map mission.*

*We usually love to give out festive treats for the season, and her cupcakes were everyponies favourite.*

*I don't know what to do now.*