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[@Mr100dragon100](/forums/writing/topics/fanfic-writing-general?post_id=5302134#post_5302134)
Maybe Elizabeth and Edward would meet once per week?

And maybe your scene needs more lines for your your charavters and less exposition about say the characters teasing him and just actual teasing. Maybe show he stuttered to show his nervousness. Or being hesistant.

Ps I was hoping to respomd earlier.
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