Fanfic Writing General

@Cyborg  
Ooh.

@Background Pony #58B7  
Yup. This is basically a reboot of the Detective Nyx series that I told you about a while back

@Cyborg  
Ahh.  
What’s the second story?

@Background Pony #58B7  
Haven’t thought that far ahead yet

@Cyborg  
Ahh.  
Well, see ya.

@Background Pony #58B7  
See ya tomorrow

@Background Pony #58B7  
Hey

@Cyborg  
Howdy. Ready for your ideas.

@Background Pony #58B7  
I have one

@Cyborg  
Tell me.

@Background Pony #58B7  
Paper Mario X MLP  
Enough said

@Cyborg  
I think it would be more interesting if Minecraft was included.  
Or Henry stickmin.

@Background Pony #58B7  
Well, this is actually paper Mario, but MLPfied

@Cyborg  
Oh.

@Background Pony #58B7  
Want to hear the main cast

@Cyborg  
Yeah.

@Background Pony #58B7  
Paper Snowflake: The Origami King  
Main Cast
 
Mario = Snowflake  
Luigi = Dragonfire  
Bowser = reformed Chrysalis  
Bowser Jr = reformed Ocellus  
Princess Peach = Twilight  
Bobby = Applejack  
Kamek = reformed Sombra  
Professor Toad = Daring Do  
Captain T. Od = Princess Luna  
Olivia = Starlight  
Olly = Discord  
Origami Crafts-Toad = Rarity  
The toads = other ponies  
Bowser’s minions = reformed changelings  
Earth ventallum = Giant turtle from season 9  
Water ventallum = Baby Ursa(in dragon form; shrunk to 3 times the normal size)  
Fire ventallum = Giant Pheonix  
Ice ventallum = Snow monster living near Yakyakistan

@Cyborg  
Interesting.

@Background Pony #58B7  
Wanna see a trailer for Paper Mario: The Origami King?

@Cyborg  
Yup.

@Background Pony #58B7  
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FX6DTLcWUdY

@Cyborg  
Lovely. Is the story based on that?

@Background Pony #58B7  
It’s based on the game in general

@Cyborg  
Ahh.

i have an idea for a love story with two characters but I have a part where the female character gets into an accident and fell onto a table with glass and was bleeding a lot and her boyfriend had to send her to the hospital and do a blood transfusion due to the female losing a lot of blood but the boyfriend has special blood that made him immortal so the blood transfusion made his girlfriend immortal too even though they did not know this yet.
 
but here is my dilemma, since this takes place in Equestria and I read that horses can’t get drunk or at least not easily, I can’t use the idea of a guy getting drunk and trying to pick fights then pushing the female character onto a table with glass cups because she tried to defend both her and her boyfriend (even though the boyfriend was protecting her first).
 
what should I do? i need this scenario so the girl can become immortal this way what should I do?
 
please give me your own ideas
 
 
and if I can I still use a guy trying to pick fights then how should it play out if ponies can’t get drunk?