Id like to know what you think of this story synopsis

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Pretty solid synopsis, I love it. Filled with emotion, adversity and has the potential for character development. The only detail I would change is have his dad have a reason to die like say he couldn't bear the thought of his wife dying so he either commits suicide or he resorts to drinking until he overdoses.
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