Id like to know what you think of this story synopsis

Mr.Myoozik
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Pretty solid synopsis, I love it. Filled with emotion, adversity and has the potential for character development. The only detail I would change is have his dad have a reason to die like say he couldn’t bear the thought of his wife dying so he either commits suicide or he resorts to drinking until he overdoses.
Mr.Myoozik
StarTrix Forever! - Derpi Supporter
Silly Pony - Celebrated the 13th anniversary of MLP:FIM, and 40 years of MLP!
Shimmering Smile - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of Equestria Girls!
Solar Hero - Went above and beyond for the Solar Deity, drawing from the power of the sun itself to bring balance to the fight against the Lunar Insurrection (April Fools 2023).
Flower Trio - Helped others get their OC into the 2023 Derpibooru Collab.
Roseluck - Had their OC in the 2023 Derpibooru Collab.
King Sombra - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of The Crystal Empire!
A Lovely Nightmare Night - Celebrated the 12th anniversary of MLP:FIM!
Princess of Love - Extra special version for those who participated in the Canterlot Wedding 10th anniversary event by contributing art.
Tree of Harmony - Drew someone's OC for the 2022 Community Collab

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@Carter Resado  
OH really? Pffft! Sorry if I caused you to spoil something, I didn’t mean to. ^__^’
 
And no problem, just saw this thread passing by and I thought I’d give feedback.
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