I'm kinda new and I'm just looking for a kickstart

Flashlight
Artist -

Hello everypony! Flashlight here and I was kinda just looking for some help. For now I have about two problems. (Not to mention this is my first fic. (Q-Q) )  
The first being that I’ve finished writing the 4th chapter of my fic and now I don’t really know where to go from that point of the story. Now your probably wondering, why don’t I just make something up it is my story after all? I just want a little bump to get me back in the right direction so I thought why not let the viewers shape the story a bit? C:
 
Now as for the second problem… actually now that I’m typing this I realize it’s not that if of a problem. Views. Lol.
 
Constructive criticism is always welcome but if you really want to, send all roast comments you want. I know you want to after you read it. C; (T-T;)
 
Here’s the link to the story:
 
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/290182/3questria
 
Did I mention it’s also a comic? Well we only have the first panel done… but it’s getting there! :3
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(Welp that’s definitely not one of the better sells I’ve seen. :p  
Admitting your comic only has one panel yet ? First fic is another human in Equestria story? Warning bells for any reader. :p )
 
On the other hand, I’ve read your chapters and I think they are very well written! You’re a pretty entertaining writer. Keep at it, I think you do have an affinity for this. I’m being honest when I say I’d love to read some more.
Flashlight
Artist -

@Vree
 
First fic is another human in Equestria story?  
Heh yeah I know, I’m going straight to hell for writing it. Lol.
 
As for it only having one panel so far? It’s a long story. XD  
However I now work with a group who were genuinely interested on it and decided to join me as artists! I’m very thankful for them.
 
I’ll keep the chapters coming! They’ll probably be posted every, or every other week.  
Thanks a bunch!
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