For those of you who don’t play Dota, this is Earthshaker.
I want to write this story in an effective way to get it featured, since I’ve only ever had one of my stories featured, and I figured that if I got some suggestions and opinions from a general crowd, this would be a cinch. That being said; does anyone have any opinions, suggestions, or constructive criticism? This would be incredibly helpful.
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