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Background Pony #E16E
What a terrible story.
 
Well, thats not true, more like a decent story, with a theme that didn’t quite connect, and a terrible self insert mary-sue protagonist, with an equally bad love interest.
BillyColt

I don’t like this story. And yes, I have actually been reading it. The main characters are unlikable and the pacing is duuuuull and the whole thing’s just irritating and unpleasant.
CannonFodder
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

@Starly  
Why does it matter that littlepip was lesbian? Would you have given a care if she was straight? Should all fanfics created from now on have straight only characters to offset the number of homosexual relationships in mlp fanfics? Should more male characters be introduced to offset the number of female characters?
 
No. Why? Cause it doesn’t matter. If a character is straight, whatever. If a character is bisexual, whatever. If a character is gay, whatever. If a character is male, whatever. If a character is female, whatever.
Background Pony #A029
@Starly  
Ah, I see what you are up about. I would retort, “Why wouldn’t her sexuality be that, all things considered?” but I would be most likely wasting my breath (or nails, in this case).
Background Pony #A029
@Starly  
I don’t understand this response. It didn’t need the shipping? Because by gods it did, otherwise Littlepip just fighting on without stopping would have been a tat too unwarranted, considering just about everyone she cared for didn’t cared for her.
 
Plus, no lesbian no reason to get out.
Background Pony #A029
@CannonFodder  
>By the end of the year.  
He has written close to a million words. If he is going to wrap it up by the end of this year, we are looking at a story of at least two million and a half words…
 
 
@Rainbow Dash  
Pretty much this.
 
On the other hand, they all suck for very different reasons, and we have to admit they could have seriously used more polish and a larger group of editors and proofreaders who actually knew their shit.
 
Take ShortSkirts and the fact he had half of /fic/, the place people get send when their stories need to be made better, fix his stories when he messed up. Even them couldn’t stop them from being unreadable at times, but they are normally better in quality than all four of them, and that is pretty telling.
 
I would love to see them remastered, but that’s unlikely to happen because of the length of two of them, the apparent retirement of one one of them, and the last one having that odd thing were there isn’t technically anything “wrong” with the story but it still reads like it could have been better.
 
Guess you can’t have everything.
 
shrugs
CannonFodder
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

@Rainbow Dash  
Yeah Project Horizons does get really emo at times, but as of late it has been toning it down a bit. Somber said that he plans on finishing it up by the end of the year, so all the story arcs are going to start wrapping up.  
I just hope it has a happy ending, cause with all the sh*t Blackjack’s gone through it’d be a letdown if she just died or something.
 
Heroes is a good read. Just don’t expect it to be amazingly great or such. The problem is that it’s the least original out of the four. I have a feeling that the next chapters are going to be getting better cause there’s been buildup with dragonslayer altering the story. I have a feeling it’s going to be getting really good towards the end when the story does eventually end.
 
@d715  
Opinions are subjective and thus have no real meaning behind them, therefore even saying that a person is wrong is meaningless or saying your opinion is right is meaningless because nothing has meaning unless they are measured in objective standards. Thus the only things that are objective and thus have meaning are things that can be physically measured.
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@MagnificentTrixie  
Nah, all 4 of them are good, for different reasons.
 
The original is what started it all, and has a great story while also creating a strong base for the other sidestories.
 
Project Horizons is a major worldbuilder, although it does get to emo for me sometimes.(I still love it, get over it)
 
Pink Eyes is interesting for its somewhat more innocent nature combined with a sad story…
 
Haven’t read any of Heroes yet, still on Horizons.
CannonFodder
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Wow. I think I maxed out the comment with I was trying to post. Since I was trying to post such a long post and it failed I’ll just summarize.
 
 
They’re all good fanfics, some are better for different reasons. Project Horizons and Pink Eyes are far more original with Pink Eyes being near practically a original story. The problem with Pink Eyes is Puppysmiles was overpowered for stupid reasons and I don’t mean that in a good way. Blackjack is overpowered cause she’s a mutant cyborg. Puppysmiles is overpowered cause she has a necromantic talisman. That gave me a migraine of “a five year old should not be able to take down a turret with a rock”. I liked Pink Eyes. The ending was cheesy, but okay.
 
Project Horizons I love. Even though it’s gone into canon porn territory it is extremely original even though there’s massive overlap and good character overlap. Blackjack doesn’t just pop and all a sudden a reaper. The problem with P-21 being annoying has been fixed with him becoming a father figure.. Thank god. I didn’t like how Psychoshy left and how poof here comes stygius, but meh. I like how Rampage’s story arc of trying to figure out who she is finally wrapping up. Lacunae’s story arc is wrapping up alright, wonder how she’s react to trixie dying. The only real loose end right now is project horizons+tokomare+Cognitum and Glory’s story.
 
I like Fallout Equestria because of how it takes fallout and gives it a good spin. While it’s not the greatest fanfic ever it is a pretty solid fanfic with no real detractors other than the ending being rushed. No seriously. I wish the story was about five or ten so chapters long cause it borderlined a deus ex machina ending. Bam trixie dies, bam red eye dies, bam littlepip gets into the spp. That’s way too much action for what five chapters? I can understand Kkat wanting to finish, but rushing a story cause you want to get it over with is a bad idea.
 
I like heroes. However I don’t like how it’s has a ton of not original content. What I would like to see is the development of how Hired Gun wants to protect her adopted daughter and helping bring peace to the region to do so and the development on that. Out of the gangs in Dise I like House. Even though he’s a ripoff his idealism of helping through cybernetics is catchy. He’s like a mix of House and Sarif from Deus Ex Human Revolution. The flashers are cool and I’d like to see them become powerful through a power vacuum. . However the other gangs can just die for all I care. I would also like to see more of Hired gun and her girlfriend’s relationship with Hired helping her with the orphanage.
 
Heroes could become a amazing story if-  
+more of house  
+more of Hired’s relationship with her daughter  
+more of Hired’s relationship with her girlfriend  
+flashers get power through vacuum of the other gangs fighting  
-the other gangs lose power and either die or become unimportant plot wise  
-the steel rangers  
-that raider gang that her brother is in stay out of the story.
 
. . . And yes that is the short version of what I was trying to write earlier.
Background Pony #A029
It was ok. Needs a lot of work to be as good as everyone claims it is, but it certainly is in the top of the fandom as far as I’m concern.
 
That said, Homage can eat a tank mine.