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Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
Non-Fungible Trixie -
Wallet After Summer Sale -

I feel that sheltering Luster this much is the reason why she’s so socially stunted. You should have let her walk in on you while experimenting with the magic of love more often.
cdge

This is pretty inconsistent. Luster is old enough to know what’s behind the censorship in the kinky book but not behind the censorship of her parents in bed ?
Brass Beau

Howdy from Shimmer Pope
The next strip is likely to continue with Luster talking to her parents so I think it feels off because the pacing feels off. Once full context is available it shouldn’t anymore.
Knackerman

@Dustcan  
Feels more like this is a ‘cut-away’ to explain the last comment in the previous comment. This strip is funny on its own, but even more so with that context. It being told ‘out of order’ seems like the last panel of the previous comment was intended as a hook for this strip.
Dustcan
Magnificent Metadata Maniac - #1 Assistant
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
Non-Fungible Trixie -
Preenhub - We all know what you were up to this evening~
Twinkling Balloon - Took part in the 2021 community collab.
Friendship, Art, and Magic (2020) - Took part in the 2020 Community Collab
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Condensed Milk - State-Approved Compensation

Dogs
@Background Pony #EE55
 
I mean, that’s kinda what I mean. Page 28 was the first mention of the censorship spell and Luster hates it. Okay so far.
 
Then page 31 has her appreciating the spell during her talk with Trixie. But we never see why she would have a 180 opinion on it.
 
And then this page happens right after 31 and shows us a reason for her change in opinion.
 
What I’m getting at is this running gag feels like it got told out of order.
Magic Nova
Sunburst - Derpi Supporter
Pixel Perfection - Hot Pockets Spotted
Silly Pony - Celebrated the 13th anniversary of MLP:FIM, and 40 years of MLP!
Magnificent Metadata Maniac - #1 Assistant
Shimmering Smile - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of Equestria Girls!
Notoriously Divine Tagger - Consistently uploads images above and beyond the minimum tag requirements. And/or additionally, bringing over the original description from the source if the image has one. Does NOT apply to the uploader adding several to a dozen tags after originally uploading with minimum to bare tagging.
An Artist Who Rocks - 100+ images under their artist tag
Solar Guardian - Refused to surrender in the face of the Lunar rebellion and showed utmost loyalty to the Solar Empire (April Fools 2023).
Crystal Roseluck - Had their OC in the 2023 Derpibooru Collab.
King Sombra - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of The Crystal Empire!

Needs more Starburst
Every child’s worst nightmare has now happened to Luster… shame that Luna isn’t working anymore as this filly needs some therapy.