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Fanfiction » Mid-August Lunch NSFW » Post 16

Applepie2010
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).

Nostalgia Nerd
A year had gone since Fluttershy had joined the Ponytones. The Ponytones in their costumes was at the annual Apple Family Zap Apple Jam Extraordinaire with Fluttershy in her costume for the first time as the crowd and the Ponytones grabbed, pushed and kicked a large, shiny, clear, yellow, round balloon. The Apple Family Zap Apple Jam Extraordinaire was an song festival with big local Ponyville singers, and one of the Ponytones songs that evening was for a support of that years Ponyville Equestria Games team. After the concert was Fluttershy rubbing the large, shiny, clear, orange, round, creaking balloon against Raritys horn and static hair for 6 hours non stop.

Fanfiction » The Great Sister Kingdom Conflict documentation- Lightpoint » Post 19

Toastypk
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Solar Guardian - Refused to surrender in the face of the Lunar rebellion and showed utmost loyalty to the Solar Empire (April Fools 2023).

Royal Advisor
DIVERGENT SCENARIO- DAYBREAKER
The following showcases an alternate scenario where things went worse than they did.
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The battle between Luna’s forces and Celestia’s had lasted almost a week, and it was clear that the path to victory for Celestia and her followers was uphill at best. They had made gains every so often, but they were just as easily wiped out.
Lightpoint could only give so much advice and direction against such an intense affront. He was, however, not willing to abandon her highness in this time of duress.
Things, however, turned from bad to worse.
Lightpoint had to relay the latest developments to her majesty, nothing good. He talked to her, told her the developments, and it was dire for sure. The Luna following ponies would be at the castle gates at any minute.
But it was clear something was not right with her highness, something different was about her. A sense of… desperation. A sense of defeat. But simultaneously, a sense of not wanting to take anything anymore.
She talked. She talked in a new, dire tone. She said that she was the Princess of the Sun. The all powerful sun. That she is the one who is to rule this world. She doesn’t need this war. She knows she is the mightiest one of all, who can wipe out these ponies of this “New Lunar Republic”, and she will show them all who is really in charge in Equestria!
Inch by inch, her fur became paler, and the pastels in her mane started turning a bright orange, before igniting and turning into raging flames. In a matter of minutes Lightpoint’s biggest fear was realized… Pushed against the wall, Celestia had succumbed to her sense of self importance… Daybreaker had emerged.
This… this was the absolute worst possible turn of events to happen. Lightpoint was frozen and completely at a loss for words. The threshold was crossed, and everything could be at risk. The Luna-tics, Canterlot itself .. But he was her advisor still, and couldn’t just leave her.
He still had to guide her.
Immediately, Daybreaker approached the opposing forces entering the castle gates and with one big blast wave of fire, wiped everypony out who was standing at the door. Luna ponies, Canterlot royal guards… everything. Nearby bushes had caught on fire, and the courtyard had become a shambles of charred material.
“Your Highness! You can’t do this! You’re going to destroy everypony! Even your own followers!” Lightpoint shouted at this new form of Celestia in a desperate attempt to keep her on a normal course. “What you’re doing is not conducive to winning this properly!”
Still, Daybreaker began to lay waste again to everything and anypony in sight. She was the true ruler of this kingdom, after all, she would say.
“Your Highness, you need to stop this destruction at once!”
This time, Daybreaker paused mid flight, and slowly turned around to look at him, with a furious and terrifying gaze from those dark red eyes of hers. Lightpoint was frozen in fear.
“I will no longer hold back,” she said in a commanding voice. “I am the ruler of this kingdom, and I will no longer let any of these ponies interfere with me!”
Her focus on Lightpoint only intensified, as she came to a realization.
“In fact, I don’t need you anymore!”
Immediately she took a deep breath and spit out of her mouth a giant fireball moving at high speed, right toward Lightpoint. As soon as it registered to him what was going to happen, he was hit by it, sending him sailing into the air, and being flung at least 20 feet away as he landed on the castle floor in a slide.
He was shaken, bruised, and seared in many places on his torso and legs. He got up in a staggered way, sporting the most terrified open mouthed expression he had ever displayed, afraid for his very being. Instinctively and without thinking about it one second, he started galloping away as fast as he could, with horrified tears streaming down his face.
He could no longer be her majesty’s advisor.
As he exited the castle through a side passage, he sat, singed and banged up, and started sobbing behind the exterior wall.
It was over. There was nothing else left to do. He thought maybe he could run away to Mount Aris or somewhere. Maybe take Commander Gray along with him. Equestria would be no place to stay anymore… whatever would be left of it.

Fanfiction » Festival (NFSW s9 spoilers) » Post 339

Applepie2010
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).

Nostalgia Nerd
Apple Bloom was the cute cenera inside a baloon and confetti decorated Sugarcube Corner as she was together with Pokey Pierce she took a dance with. The filly was scared of balloons and she did not like Pokey Pierce give a bunch of balloons a 2 hour long horn massage as the pony rubbed himself under the legs by feeling the soft balloon skins. Apple Bloom was less nervous of balloons as she and Pokey Pierce was grabbing a pink, creaking, shiny and clear thick balloon for 2 hours.

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Artist -

Chilencio...
@Zlat Design
“But I’m sure I’m no where near to be readable”.
Don’t worry. None of us start off being “readable”. My lazy ass hasn’t even finished a chapter one yet xDDD
Do you already have a defined plot for your story? I feel like that would help a lot to understand what’s happening in your draft xddd

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Fanfiction » Civil War of the Celestial Sisters: The Ramblings of a Celestia Devoted Guard. » Post 8

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Fanfiction » Civil War of the Celestial Sisters: The Ramblings of a Celestia Devoted Guard. » Post 3

WojTek-ツ
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Silly Pony - Celebrated the 13th anniversary of MLP:FIM, and 40 years of MLP!
Shimmering Smile - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of Equestria Girls!
Artist -

NLR Enthusiast
You’re welcome! I thank you for your efforts and sharing it. ^ - ^
Ooh, for a sec I thought you were German there. Ja ja ja! Deutsch laugh (not meant to be racist!)
Well…
About the spelling marks it’s not necessarily, it’s just an advise. Is up to you if you want them or not, in my case, I did understood Eclipse’s emotions portrayed; but the marks is for emphasizing more, you know what I mean? Like I said, it could be just me XD
Someone else proofreading it should help too. =D

Fanfiction » Civil War of the Celestial Sisters: The Ramblings of a Celestia Devoted Guard. » Post 2

Twiny Dust
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Silly Pony - Celebrated the 13th anniversary of MLP:FIM, and 40 years of MLP!
Shimmering Smile - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of Equestria Girls!
Artist -
Solar Hero - Went above and beyond for the Solar Deity, drawing from the power of the sun itself to bring balance to the fight against the Lunar Insurrection (April Fools 2023).

NLR's Bodyguard
@WojTek-ツ
Thanks you glad you liked it.
I honestly didn’t know spiel was a German word until I looked it up. The way I’m using it is the English for a long speech.
And by spelling marks do you like mean explanation marks more often? Cuz I meant there are some points where I could have emphasized how angry or excited she was with them. Probably should had someone proofread this before uploading it.

Fanfiction » Civil War of the Celestial Sisters: The Ramblings of a Celestia Devoted Guard. » Post 1

WojTek-ツ
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Silly Pony - Celebrated the 13th anniversary of MLP:FIM, and 40 years of MLP!
Shimmering Smile - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of Equestria Girls!
Artist -

NLR Enthusiast
Chef kisses
I did enjoy this fic diary momentum from Eclipse. Very refreshing for your first time, Dear Twiny.
Bravo! ✌︎(•w•)✌︎
It’s a good thing she is having her day off, hope she get’s back her transfer.
She was venting indeed. Dx lol
Is “spiel” a typo or I’m getting German Eclipse vibes? O.o’
Lightpoint was spot on, good job. XD
Now, everything is really good, this reminds me those old day fics I used to encounter.
Now the grammar, for a better experience on behalf of every reader, you should use spelling marks to emphatic better the emotions that you’re portraying in the story telling.
Overall, it’s great but if you’re aiming for ongoing fanfiction, you should consider the marks. =D

Fanfiction » Festival (NFSW s9 spoilers) » Post 338

Applepie2010
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).

Nostalgia Nerd
All the birds in Griffonstone got a round and pink balloon at Galena´s Birthday. Greta had a balloon phobia and was afraid but relaxed as Galena gave her a balloon beak massage for 6 hours non stop. Greta then felt less afraid of balloons after her beak balloon massage so the two brids was grabbing the creaking, round and pink balloon for 3 hours non stop.

Fanfiction » Civil War of the Celestial Sisters: The Ramblings of a Celestia Devoted Guard. » Topic Opener

Twiny Dust
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Silly Pony - Celebrated the 13th anniversary of MLP:FIM, and 40 years of MLP!
Shimmering Smile - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of Equestria Girls!
Artist -
Solar Hero - Went above and beyond for the Solar Deity, drawing from the power of the sun itself to bring balance to the fight against the Lunar Insurrection (April Fools 2023).

NLR's Bodyguard

This is a interpretation of the April Fools 2023 Solar Empire vs New Lunar Republic event from the point of view of My Royal Guardmare OC Eclipse, more information on her here, in the form of diary entries.
This is my first fic, so go easy.
Prologue
Day before The Civil War
Eclipse’s Diary Entry 35, 3-31-1111 C.E.
Huh, it’s been awhile since I’ve written one of these things. I guess it’s uneventful the past…what? 5 month or so since the Storm King’s Invasion, so there’s been no need for me to vent about anything after that whole spiel I did last time. About how almost the entire E.U.P was on Mandatory Leave on that day because of some higher up thought it’d be a great idea, ’Because it was the Friendship Festival!’ he said, and somehow getting Her Majesty Princess Celestia to agree despite mine and many others in the Guard’s protests and if I was there, I would have so kicked that Tempest Mare’s flank for daring to even thinking about attacking Her Majesty!
Scratched out crude drawing of a broken horned Unicorn Stick Pony being bucked in the flank by a Royal Guard Pegasus Stick Pony.
But, I went on forever about all this last time. As for the now, things been getting a bit frustrating for the Guard with all the protesting and complaining from the lower class citizens about that stupid unnecessary tax bill those Upstuck Nobles somehow slip past Her Majesty! I honestly don’t know why she keeps them around. I swear they have to always make things worse, but this is the way Her Majesty’s always done things… and I guess they’re not all bad, like Fancy Pants, Sweet Bun, and Gray the First, unfortunately, they’re the rare exception. But, I probably shouldn’t question Her Majesty, she has her reasons, even if I don’t understand them.
I can never get my head around these politics, despite working in close proximity with the Princesses these past couple years, the way I understood it from Lightpoint when reporting in Her Majesty and Princess Luna about what those Tricky Nobles pulled off, is they hid a clause in some bill, and apparently distracted Princess Celestia when it was being approved so she wouldn’t notice, that doubles the tax rate on sugar, which of course is funneled right into their greedy fat Bit pouches and obviously made all of bakers in the Empire furious, I bet that didn’t make Countess Sweet Bun happy at all. Celestia, her sweet rolls are amazing, although not as good as Donut Joe’s donuts. Wait, I guess this is mean his donuts would be more expensive now… Bucking Nobles!
Lightpoint also reported something about rumors of a Nightmare Moon Cult popping up, which must be just unfounded rumors, Princess Luna is such a kind if a bit quirky at times Pony and what ponies would really want her to go back to being that monster. She was so wrecked with guilt when she returned, which thankfully after the incident in Ponyville with that living nightmare a year ago and some much needed therapy afterwards, Princess Luna seems to be much better on that now.
And Lightpoint that insufferable brown-nosing Lightpoint! Of course reported all this with that usual lovey-dovey look in his eyes towards Her Majesty!… I’m stuck guarding Princess Luna for years now, while he gets to follow her around all day like a love sick puppy! It always makes my feathers ruffle!… I wish her majesty would reassign me back to her personal guard, that’s the whole reason I join up with the E.U.P in the first place was to be in service of HER! Not her sister!… and here I am complaining about the same thing again.
It’s not fair to think that way towards Princess Luna, she’s always been very thoughtful towards me and her other staff and readily adamant towards the protection of her subjects. Which I’ve is something always respected her for even in the early days, when I was first assigned to her, with her odd little quarts she had from being out of touch because of her banishment. Same goes with the BatPonies and their fierce loyalty towards her, which is something I understand and respect considering my own devotion towards Her Majesty Princess Celestia. And you think after 3 years of service with them I would be used to the screeching and the rare occasional Traditional Royal Canterlot Voice nowadays… but no I’m not. Thank Celestia for those enchanted ear plugs!…
And speaking of the BatPonies… they have been very odd and skittish lately. I mean more than usual, it’s like they’re actively avoiding me for some reason. When I cornered Private Mango Sweet about it earlier, she stammer on something about a BatPony only Attack Training Drill ordered by Princess Luna, which I guess makes sense?, but it’s odd I wasn’t informed on it or at the very least over heard it at some point considering how close I am with Princess Luna all day when she’s up at least…
Whatever, it won’t matter for me, cuz I finally get some Requested Leave for the week, YAY! First time in a while and I’m going to sleep in all day tomorrow, then finally hang out with my civilian friends for more than an hour at a time, eat some apparently expensive donuts! And not worry about whatever going on with civil disagreements, supposed imaginary cults, mysterious BatPony Night Guard drills and whatever craziness ends up popping up… then hopefully after my Leave finished Princess Celestia will finally accept my request to transfer back to her personal guard.
Arthor notes: This takes place sometime in the middle of season 8. The in year 1111 C.E. (Celestial Era) is a reference to ‘Horseplay’ where it was 1111 years since Princess Celestia first rose the Sun, which would be a defining calendar event.
I also have a headcanon that the entire series takes place within 4 years, with season 8 being an entire year on its own because of the school focus element.
And if you see any spelling or grammar mistakes please let me know so I can fix it.
Edit: Thanks once again to Wojtek-ツ for the art of Eclipse that would be come the cover art!

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Applepie2010
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).

Nostalgia Nerd
Pinkie Pie had her Birthday party in Klugeltown. All in the crowd in Klugeltown got a pink, shiny and clear Ryan balloon animal by the pony. Mori was very afraid of balloons but he felt relaxed Pinkie Pie and he held a creaking pink, shiny and clear Ryan balloon animal between their mounths for an hour as the baby shark and the pony was kissing the balloon.

Fanfiction » Chronicles of The Event Project (Working Title): Diaries of Countess Sweet Bun, NLR. » Post 22

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