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1. heavily violent anti mare do well fic in which dash goes dark side and enacts revenge
    
2. Twist X Snails SoL in which they fall in love after a food poisoning incident
    
3. CLOP
    
4. Anti-Twilicorn piece that may or may not involve Nyx.
    
5. pregnancy fic

@gasmaskangel
I’m trying to write an adventure fic, but the beginning is taking too long to make. Plus, I tried to write without looking back but I stop and go back and try to fix whatever error there is. Then I look at it as a whole, and then I feel frustrated and delete the entire thing.

This happens so much and I’m really annoyed with it. I can’t freewrite for anything.

1. The story begins with the end of the story; Fancy Pants stands in the room that was once his mother’s and stares at a box on his bed. It won’t be revealed what the box has until the actual end of the story. We then flash back to the past where Fancy is just a filly.
    
2. Fancy and his mum - I still need to figure out who she is; the MLP Wiki is being an ass and won’t load so I can’t look at obscure background ponies, though it’ll probably end up being Royal Ribbon - are sitting in a carriage on the way to an unnamed country. All we know is that land is selling “for cheap” there, and apparently, according to the sellers, it comes with workers.
    
3. Cart is stuck in patch of mud; it’s a short scene but it’ll be the first time Fancy sees zebras in his life; they’re watching from the distance, and his mother insists that they don’t make eye contact. He’s confused, being a kid and all. It’s freed by the chauffeurs, they go on their merry way to the house his mom commissioned for their arrival.
    
4. They arrive at the house, and find these so-called workers under the control of Lyrica Lilac (I’m sticking to the idea that mares are the predominate gender in Equestria; colts actually have little say in affairs, which’ll be more important when Fancy’s an adult). She apologizes for their incompetency, though they haven’t actually done anything yet. Fancy makes his way to his room, and catches a glimpse of a tiny mare in an apron - young Zecora.
    
   Meanwhile, we learn that Fancy’s mother wants her young son to “grow up” so he’ll be prepared for a married life hen he comes of age, even though that day is far from fruition. He’s been holding onto a plush rabbit for some time, which will act as a symbol of his youth, and the mum wants to get rid of it, perhaps mentioning some sort of trade off for its desertion.
    
5. We’ll speed through the month they stay there, as it isn’t very important. it will be mentioned that the zebras aren’t allowed to interact with the unicorns without being spoken to first, and perhaps how they’re treated. The last day at the house arrives, and Fancy is about to leave, rabbit in hoof, when his mother suddenly grabs it from him. He’s about to argue the gesture when the figure of a young zebra comes into his view, its tail being pulled by the mouth of a guard working at the house. He is introduced to Zecora, whose actually name is…well, I actually haven’t decided yet, but it’ll probably be Adaeze - something hard to pronounce, giving the unicorns a reason to “ponify” her name. She will now be Fancy’s personal servant - think of it almost as like doubling as a lady-in-waiting and slave.
    
   Any suggestions for what happens after?

I can’t get myself to write a damn fanfic…

So, I’m formulating ideas for that LunaBlue surprise incest story, and I need something for the ending, when Luna is basking in the afterglow after she takes advantage of a drunk Blueblood in a Pony Dracula Costume, having returned to Canterlot from her first Nightmare Night, and I need some kind of punchline to end the story with.