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Fanfiction » The terible crossover fanfic Challenge » Post 6

Ore-O
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Squidamouche
“Your challenge is to write crossover fanfiction combining GI Joe and Robocop. The story should use evil clones as a plot device!”
 
That’s actually pretty badass!
 
Synopsis: Tired of constant failure, Cobra Commander thought of an idea to use stronger troops out of the GI Joes’ genes. The plan went smoothly and the Joes resort to recruiting more members for help. One man stepped up to the task, and his name was Alex Murphy, willing to serve to fight Cobra and end their terrorism for good.

Fanfiction » The terible crossover fanfic Challenge » Post 5

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“Your challenge is to write crossover fanfiction combining Joe Biden and Cinderella. The story should use a promotion at work as a plot device!”
 
Challenge Accepted.
 
 
Synopsis: Joe Biden is the prince. And Cinderella get promoted from work Servent to Helping Biden make his day by marrying him in a great ball.

Fanfiction » The terible crossover fanfic Challenge » Post 4

Ore-O
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Squidamouche
@Dr Outback  
I think I made this long ago, but it’s dead by now.
 
Anyways: “Your challenge is to write crossover fanfiction combining Metallica and Soul Calibur. The story should use teaching kids to say no to drugs as a plot device!”
 
Synopsis: James Hetfield and Siegfried Schatauffen join forces to stop a drug cartel headed by Dave Mustane and Nightmare. Basically, a more metal All Star Cartoon to the Rescue.

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Fanfiction » Ramble: In general, bronies have bad taste in Fimfictions. » Post 26

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What I get from your opening post is not that “bronies have bad taste in Fimfictions” but “bronies don’t like the things I do”.
 
Rightly or wrongly, “dark” (or, more disparagingly, grimdark) as a genre has certain negative connotations associated with it, viz-à-viz quality and I would say those connotations are more rightly deserved when it comes to fanfiction.
 
Cupcakes is an extreme example but it perfectly highlights the problem - the drama is completely overblown to the point where it’s more amusing for how poorly it’s handled. And all too often it’s easy to fall into that trap of trying to darken the tone of a story but instead of making the drama realistic or in some way relatable, it’s obvious that the author just doesn’t grasp how to do it.
 
I’m hesitant to say this because of how insulting it is but, again, there is an assumption out there that violence (at least the overwrought and needlessly explicit kind in Cupcakes) is the purview of adolescents taking their first steps in fanfiction.
 
Is it right that people make such presumptions? Well yes and no. Time is the most valuable commodity and in trying to get a reader to read your work, you’re basically having to sell it to them in exchange for their time. Glossing over a poorly made, grimdark image might earn a roll of the eyes but only because artwork is immediate. Reading a story takes time and effort in concentration and the emotional payout can take a while. Because of that, having wasted so much time on a poorly written fic is naturally going to stir up a stronger response.
 
So of course people are going to be wary after being stung on poorly written dark fics. And because it’s so easy to get wrong, there’s proportionally going to be more of them (IMO).
 
In that way, I agree to an extent with Scygnus but obviously not for the same reasons. It is easier to read something short (and comedic or sexually explicit, etc.) but that is, again, because you simply cannot ignore that the time invested versus possible time wasted isn’t quite as much an issue as it is with something longer.
 
The absolute worst thing you, as a writer, can do (and I’m speaking from experience here) is make your reader come away from your story feeling like they’ve wasted their time.
 
As others have said, however, you also cannot discount how much of a departure it is from the tone of the show itself. I’d prefer not to speculate on how many enjoy it for its light-hearted tone but for the purposes of this discussion, I would say it’s quite a sizeable number.
 
My favourite fanfic is Twilight Sky Over Canterlot. I read it when it first came out and have loved it since. I’m going to spoiler the next few paragraphs for anyone interested in reading it who hasn’t yet. || It is, for all intents and purposes, just Twilight taking a trip back to Canterlot and reconnecting with ponies she’s met and known, as well as her home. But it’s more than that. It’s a glimpse into how we can touch those around us so deeply and profoundly, without even realising it or knowing just how much our little actions mean. It’s suffused in the kind of nostalgia that’s whipped up upon revisiting one’s old home and haunts; about realising that that nostalgia doesn’t have to overtake us.||
 
It’s been easily over a year since I’ve read it so many of the smaller details elude me right now but I must stress that for its richness and depth, the structure is incredibly simple. Yet it has been used to great effect.
 
Ultimately, what it comes down to (as the above is an example of) is being able to handle your chosen subject. Sometimes, yes, it is the idiot public not appreciating your magnum opus but sometimes, too, it is because you only see your baby.

Fanfiction » Ramble: In general, bronies have bad taste in Fimfictions. » Post 25

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@monus783  
don’t take this the wrong way, but that’s just a bad philosophy to have. I don’t like being this direct because I usually just critique stories, not writers themselves, but I’m willing to make an exception here.
 
Honestly, if you consider how reception will come to be more important than telling your own story, you are actually far better off in your position right now. Think about it, if this is the only thought driving your interest in telling your story forward, what will that eventually say about your own story if all you’re being driven by is doubt? that doubt just keeps holding back all of your potential and all you’re going to do is prove it right, just because of how much you’re letting it control your actions.  
In fact, it’s more this point I’m having trouble making other writers aware of, having them focus on actually telling a story than they are on reception.
 
I’m not saying that being in this state of defeatism is easy, but this?
 
but I may not since I’m afraid a lot of people will hate it if it’s noticed to begin with.
 
I hope you understand why I’m telling you that, based on this reason of yours, you have nothing to complain about.

Fanfiction » The terible crossover fanfic Challenge » Post 2

Dr Outback
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@Silent_Witness  
Wow you might have gotten it easy.
 
Crossover  
Your challenge is to write crossover fanfiction combining Twilight Zone and Totally Spies. The story should use a character dying two days before they were going to retire as a plot device!
 
 
I know barely know anything about TS so this will be hard.  
Synopsis:  
Jerry has been captured and presumably killed on his last mission. The girls end up in the last place they saw him. They figure out they cant leave the building. They meet three similar girls whom they have to solve problems for them to be able to leave.

Fanfiction » The terible crossover fanfic Challenge » Post 1

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Well, by pure happenstance, this is the result I got:
 
Your challenge is to write crossover fanfiction combining Silent Hill and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. The story should use alcoholism as a plot device!
 
Well, here’s my synopsis: Bery Punch drinks to escape the problems she faces in her life- no friends, lousy job, parents who hate her and so forth. One day, she gets a letter from her family saying that her mother has died, and that she needs to attend the funeral. She doesn’t want to, but because her little sister who she loves dearly asked her, she heads out. But after only a short time on the road, a fog rolls in and she becomes hopelessly lost. Eventually, she stumbles on a small, seemingly abandoned town called… Silent Hill. And within, she fights horrible monsters representing her alcoholism, and her hatred of her parents.

Fanfiction » The terible crossover fanfic Challenge » Topic Opener

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This was a forum thread way early in its creation. I’m putting a challenge on it. This site gives you two things that you should crossover and a plot device. The challenge for you is too make a synopsis with what it give you. Rule that it has to make some sense. Also post what you got with your synopsis.

Fanfiction » Ramble: In general, bronies have bad taste in Fimfictions. » Post 24

Maskarade

@monus783  
Even if you write it and it gets no attention, it still feels good to finish a story. To read it yourself and to know that you created a universe, a universe constructed from your mind, with a story that is yours and yours only.
 
I would love to hear your idea and possibly share my opinion, if that would be something you’d be looking for.

Fanfiction » Ramble: In general, bronies have bad taste in Fimfictions. » Post 23

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@monus783  
You should go ahead and write it anyway. Folks might actually like it! And if they don’t like it, and they’re able to constructively tell you why they don’t like it and how you could have done better, then you’ll be able to use that advice to make your next story better.
 
Take the plunge! There’s really nothing to lose.

Fanfiction » Graphic Novel? Or Text Story? » Post 7

redweasel
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Fuzzbutt
it depends. a text story will give us the best immersion. graphic novels display what you’re supposed to imagine, which then conflicts with what you actually imagine, and that makes the story seem less real. a graphic novel will give the fastest delivery of ideas, and the best composition. it’s much harder to leave facts up to interpretation with just text than it is with a picture.
 
basically text lets the reader decide how and a graphic novel lets the reader decide what.

Fanfiction » Reason for Celestia to turn Corrupt » Post 4

redweasel
Duck - "someone befriended them, saved them, coaxed them out of their shell, and showed them that sex is nothing to be afraid of. I’m kind of envious of that rape victim"

Fuzzbutt
when becoming nightmare moon, princess luna was imprisoned on the moon for a thousand years. imagine that, one thousand years with nothing to do but stare at the world you wish you could be part of. it was later revealed that luna didn’t go completely insane because she was in an enchanted sleep for the duration of her curse, or some fascimile thereof. sort of a cop-out, but it’s mlp what can you expect. clearly luna’s experience was terrible, but more in the sense of a nightmare than in the sense of a mind shatteringly boring imprisonment.
 
princess celestia had no such magical sleep to rely on.
 
she had to raise the moon every night.
 
reminded of the sister she lost, her only friend left alive.
 
reminded of her failure.
 
for a thousand years
 
every. single. night.
 

Fanfiction » Fanfic Writing General » Post 1276

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Fanfiction » Fanfic Writing General » Post 1274

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@SquiggyBomb
Who is Ruby Gloom? And while we’re on the topic, who is John Galt and why is he such an asshole?
 
“John Galt” is a major character in Ayn Rand’s controversial novel Atlas Shrugged. The reason why it’s so controversial is because in it, Rand lays out her philosophy of Objectivism, which condemns such things like altruism and religion. According to some interpretations of Objectivism, doing good things while expecting nothing in return (one definition of altruism) is self-destructive, and therefore pointless.

Fanfiction » Some Little Help Please » Topic Opener

monus783

I don’t even know on how should I write my fics. I have a clear idea on what I really want to write about but I just simply don’t know how start my stories, especially when it comes to grammar and sentence structuring. I could probably go to fimfiction to ask this question but I wanted to know if you guys could give some ideas as well.

Fanfiction » Ramble: In general, bronies have bad taste in Fimfictions. » Post 22

monus783

Truth is, I actually stopped going to Fimfiction for a while because I was pretty frustrated at the stories that were being featured (especially if they’re shipfics), and I have a story setting in my head that has been bothering me for the last two years that I’ve been in the fandom and I really want to write it now, but I may not since I’m afraid a lot of people will hate it if it’s noticed to begin with. I sort of empathize with OP on this one. Not much can be done about though.

Fanfiction » Fanfic Writing General » Post 1273

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@gasmaskangel  
Ruby Gloom is an adorable cartoon that came from Canada. You remember the Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy? Imagine the polar opposite of that. A dark gothic aesthetic but with the CUTEST characters.

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Fanfiction » Crossovers » Post 12

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Any crossover can potentially work, as long as you’re willing to put actual time and effort into making it all fit together decently.
 
Just slapping character X into Equestria is, quite frankly, not going to make the grade. You want good crossover then you do the work - look at something like Magical Pony Lyrical Twilight my Purpleprose on fimfic for example. He has threads and threads of this stuff while it was in-progress on some forums and I can say with confidence that he put a hell of a lot of work into making the settings mesh well.
 
Though in fairness magical girls and magical ponies are kind of already on the same wavelength to begin with…
 
Either way the key is to make the settings either work together or play off one another. Stardust by Arad (fimfic again) is an example of the latter, where the fair horribleness of the nuXcom setting is used to bounce Twilight and her Equestrian upbringing off of. Again a lot of work went into making it so that one setting didn’t overwhelm (or worse, patronize) the other.
 
Nothing is more irritating than having one setting cross into another just so that setting can explain how terrible the other one is for whatever reasons.
 
 
Aaaanyway, as for me… My one guilty desire is to do some kind of Simon Pegg Film Character (Shaun or Officer Angel most likely) meets Equestria thing. Obviously the setups and such would be very different depending on which Pegg character, but most Pegg films have an earthy kind of humor i think would bounce well off of Equestria’s setting.
 
Imagine, for instance, the idea of Shaun dealing with the fact that the back of his booze cupboard has ended up dimensionally linked with the back of a booze cupboard belonging to an Equestrian (in that when the doors are open pony can see human across several rows of booze and vice versa). Yes, i would find this most amusing.

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I just started writing a Power Ponies fanfiction a couple days ago. In it, the Power Ponies try to track and take down a Batman-like vigilante who shows up in Maretropolis.

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