Just a change in the description, the rest stays the same.
The new description:
Small shy earth-pony from Baltimare. Works as an engineer in Equestria Energy Corporation, maintaining turbines in nuclear power plant. Heavily augmented. Adores industry and armed forces.
Bought himselft military-grade augments otherwise he would be to weak to join the military reserves. Besides military stuff has many hobbies like drawing, airsoft, computer hardware, guns, Skeet shooting, music, history, computer games and augmentation tuning. Friend with Graceful Motion, Delly and Benzene.