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Well there IS _*The Great Alicorn Hunt_* by Ralph Hayes Jr. where not only is Apple Bloom turned into an Alicorn (1/5th the way through the story so far): but also the Mane Six to become Alicorns because Twilight had modified Starswirls' Spell to have them all Ascend at the same time:
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In another time, another place, an alicorn Princess sent her faithful student a final test-- an unfinished spell by the greatest unicorn mage in Equestrian history. After a near-disastrous first effort, the student finally solved the riddle of the spell, completed it, and was transformed (as her mentor had planned) into an alicorn princess._

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In _*this_* time and place, when Twilight received a certain notebook by a certain Starswirl the Bearded from a certain Princess, she actually had half a clue as to what she was doing the FIRST time...[/bq]

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"From one to another, another to one._

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A mark of one's destiny singled out alone, UNfulfilled;_

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From all of us together,_

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To each of us together,_

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With the marks of our destinies made one,_

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and one shared by all without end."_

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The canon version seemed to be more about fulfilling one pony's destiny...which made it seem like the spell was about exploiting five other ponies to ascend oneself. Starswirl, I suspect, was a jerkass._[/bq]

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A recommended starting point of this story would have to be its prequel _[*Parting Words_: *](https://archiveofourown.org/works/5510981/chapters/12727478)
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Background Pony #158B
"@Phantom Rider":/1096106#comment_5082846
Well there IS _The Great Alicorn Hunt_ by Ralph Hayes Jr. where not only is Apple Bloom turned into an Alicorn (1/5th the way through the story so far): but also the Mane Six to become Alicorns because Twilight had modified Starswirls' Spell to have them all Ascend at the same time:
[bq]_In another time, another place, an alicorn Princess sent her faithful student a final test-- an unfinished spell by the greatest unicorn mage in Equestrian history. After a near-disastrous first effort, the student finally solved the riddle of the spell, completed it, and was transformed (as her mentor had planned) into an alicorn princess._

This is not that time and place.

In _this_ time and place, when Twilight received a certain notebook by a certain Starswirl the Bearded from a certain Princess, she actually had half a clue as to what she was doing the FIRST time...[/bq]

_"From one to another, another to one._

_A mark of one's destiny singled out alone, UNfulfilled;_

_From all of us together,_

_To each of us together,_

_With the marks of our destinies made one,_

_and one shared by all without end."_

[bq]_The canon version seemed to be more about fulfilling one pony's destiny...which made it seem like the spell was about exploiting five other ponies to ascend oneself. Starswirl, I suspect, was a jerkass._[/bq]

A recommended starting point of this story would have to be its prequel _Parting Words_: https://archiveofourown.org/works/5510981/chapters/12727478
No reason given
Edited by Background Pony #158B
Background Pony #158B
"@Phantom Rider":/1096106#comment_5082846
Well there IS _The Great Alicorn Hunt_ by Ralph Hayes Jr. where not only is Apple Bloom turned into an Alicorn (1/5th the way through the story so far): but also the Mane Six to become Alicorns because Twilight had modified Starswirls' Spell to have them all Ascend at the same time:
[bq]_In another time, another place, an alicorn Princess sent her faithful student a final test-- an unfinished spell by the greatest unicorn mage in Equestrian history. After a near-disastrous first effort, the student finally solved the riddle of the spell, completed it, and was transformed (as her mentor had planned) into an alicorn princess._

This is not that time and place.

In _this_ time and place, when Twilight received a certain notebook by a certain Starswirl the Bearded from a certain Princess, she actually had half a clue as to what she was doing the FIRST time...[/bq]

_"From one to another, another to one.

A mark of one's destiny singled out alone, UNfulfilled;

From all of us together,

To each of us together,

With the marks of our destinies made one,

and one shared by all without end."_

[bq]_The canon version seemed to be more about fulfilling one pony's destiny...which made it seem like the spell was about exploiting five other ponies to ascend oneself. Starswirl, I suspect, was a jerkass._[/bq]

A recommended starting point of this story would have to be its prequel _Parting Words_: https://archiveofourown.org/works/5510981/chapters/12727478
No reason given
Edited by Background Pony #158B