@ze Thanks for the critique man. At the moment I actually needed a modernish logo for a project, but I definitely want to do this in the original style son.

SUGGESTIONS:  
Looks too modern to fit into a Fallout environment.
 
You want a font style that yells 50s or 60s. A font with a serif might be the ticket.
 
Maybe you should use capital letters. At least for the first letter.

I’ll print it then put it at the back of my laptop

I’ve never read this fanfic…  
I get enough shit for hating another inexplicably popular fanfic, don’t need to add more fuel to the fire.

I still wonder why the writer mixed 1984 and Fallout.
 
I still think it doesn’t mesh. But that’s just me personally. I’m pretty sure you guys will tell me it works really well and meshes fine in the story and that I should read it to see for myself.
 
I’m just saying personally, as someone who has read and enjoyed 1984 I don’t see how it could work.
 
I guess I’m just peeved that someone cherry picks things from a book like that.
 
I’m weird.

Minimage?