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[NOTE: No, she’s not a “Mary Sue”. Mary Sues are characters that are perfect in every way. Get your shit right.]
 
NAME: Crystal Heart (or Princess Crystlia; “oc:princesscrystlia” and “oc:crystalheart” are the same thing.)  
AGE: Around 200-ish years (that’s young for a pony like her; it’s about 18 years for a human)  
GENDER: Female  
SPECIES: Bat pony/pegasus mix  
PERSONALITY: Shy; kind; ‘cold’
 
BACKSTORY:  
[1] Being born in Canterlot (and as a half bat pony), Crystal was bullied a lot. However, she had a huge interest in water (yes, water). Since the Hearts have their own magic (they created it because they were being tortured for no reason; basically for self-defense), Crystal made her own kind of magic; WATER magic. She called it “Crystlia”. She created her magic for self-defense (she was also nearly raped). She could summon rain clouds, thunder/lightning clouds, and maybe a hurricane. Crystal doesn’t use her magic much, she’s afraid to use it because she somewhat couldn’t control it (White Heart helped her control it later).
 
[2] The only reason she has a “kingdom” is because (1) she accidentally created it and (2) she wanted somewhere to live– alone. It’s not really a “kingdom”; just a small town, basically. Ponies that felt sorry for her called it a “kingdom”.
 
[3] Crystal isn’t an ACTUAL princess; but ponies treat her like she is. In fact, she’s KNOWN as the “princess of water”. Crystal hates being called that, but she’s too shy to speak up for it.
 
NOTES:  
[1] You may THINK she’s a “Mary Sue”, but she ISN’T. Why?  
(1) She’s not an actual princess  
(2) She isn’t perfect. She’s SHY!!  
(3) Mary Sues are characters that are perfect in every way.
 
[2] Crystal’s power is PERMANENTLY stored in her soul and amulet (I forgot it in the picture). Even if her amulet is taken OFF, she still has her magic.
 
[3] The HEARTS aren’t Mary Sues either. Nor are they “edgy”. They are being bullied probably because (1) they’re somewhat against Celestia and (2) rumors are being spread about them.
 
[4] Crystal’s mane was black when she was a filly. Her mane and coat are made of the water magic she created.
 
[5] If you don’t like my art or OCs, fuck off. Keep it to yourself. I don’t want to hear bullshit. I know I’m not the best artist, but I’m I M P R O V I N G .
 
AGAIN, if you don’t like my art, fuck off. I don’t care what you have to say. Hate me all you like. I don’t care if you listen to me or not. That’s YOUR fault, not mine.

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I love the way you updated Crystal. I would suggest that if you’re still working on a pony, don’t post a picture until they’re all the way thought through or almost all the way thought through.