Very cute! I love your art style! Makes futashy so adorable!

This was amazing just found it and yus just umf

This was great, especially for your first comic! Keep up the awesome work!

That was surprisingly wholesome for a porn comic.

Sweet and cute )

@Garden Tinker
hghnghnhgn i really appreciate your feedback and will take it into the next project <3

Well, for being extra-late to the party, many others have already said what I would here. Excellent first comic, very wholesome, nice to see both parties enjoyed their ends, and a sweet, safe ending (not even a kiss - just a heartfelt nuzzle!). Thumbs-up for the cuteness of the style, even if you think it plain.

Rallies for that potential sequel you teased, as expected, or perhaps one of BGP’s suggestions - should the fancy for anything further strike you, of course.

And I’ll double-down on that refute against “there’s much better stuff around and i’m by far not good at making these”, for reasons leveled by BGP and MostValuedPony.

Extra emphasis on Valued’s mention of pacing; I was wondering why things felt so smooth when reading this, and that would explain it! You weren’t afraid to throw in pages like the one that just had Rarity carrying Flutters to and quickly preparing the bed, and you really gave each part of things their respective screentime (the whole opening with Fluttershy’s explanation and the two sharing an awkward look-away, Rarity’s inspection of Fluttershy’s assets/condition, for examples) without understating them or having them linger overmuch. I’ve also seen the sort of comics they’re referring to, indeed at one point so often that I was beginning to wonder if that was some sort of ‘the goal’ that I was just failing to grasp the majesty of, and the clean and crisp way you presented each action was very much appreciated, in hindsight. (I was idly thinking that the little arrows were a neat idea as I read through, as well as that the stream of events was easy to understand, but this comment put those thoughts into coherent perspective.)

…I may have rambled a bit for what was ultimately a somewhat short comic (fifteen pages and a cover is still a nice handful!), but uh… I was glad to stumble across it, and I wanted to reiterate as much… So yeah, seeing what you care to drop on us in the future, should you deign, would be cool!

Part 2? They wake up from a nap and fuk?

Your comic was very wholesome and cute, which is a charm many cannot capture. The art and the pacing were perfect as well, which are also two things’ people don’t get right all the time, particularly the pacing. It was very clear what was happening. Often, I read comics and I don’t know what the hell is happening from one panel to the next, it’s like a jumble of motion and actions.

So yeah, I am late to the party but I think you did an amazing job! It would be awesome to see more, but either way I am following your artist tag just from how wholesome and cute this whole ordeal was.

Like it, hope to see more like this.

@khaelin04
O i didn’t mean it agressively or anything, i just wanted to note it _o3o

@MCA_DB Sorry, I’m blind, just trying to help.

@khaelin04
I already wrote “NSFW COMIC” in the discription of all other ‘safe’ rated comic pages

@khaelin04
NSFW warning is “built-in”, as by default all NSFW content is hidden, and a person has to enable it specifically.
So, they will see the warnings if they try to find the rest of the comic.

I love the last picture, it’s very cute. I would consider some kind of NSFW warning incase someone finds this as safe, and is curious about the rest.

this was a delightful and adorable series!

I love that the last page is totally safe.

The last panel is so cute aaaa

This was a fantastic comic, I loved it! I hope we can see more of these two in the future <3

Much better stuff? I humbly disagree. There are not a lot of pieces on this site in the form of a comic. There are even less comics of this quality in art and writing.

The comic made me want more which is very good indeed.

Fun that this comic has some hooks which a sequel can make use of. Zecora her cure, twilight (or maybe even starlight) her magic as an ad hoc remedy, rarity her new found “hobby”.

Such a cute and wholesome ending. I’m so looking forward to more from you!

Nice first comic!

@MCA_DB
Definitely needs a sequel!

Rarity didn’t really get any “helping out” of her own… if you know what I mean.

The adorable style of your comic is what really makes it so great!

@Background Pony #2C33
No promises, i have a lot of other projects and stuff to do. I do have ideas, so maybe one day, but i don’t think anytime soon