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A long time ago didn’t draw my fav lesbeans pastel horses. Only bebes, bebes… Parents need to draw too!
 
Top one: Something from their foalhood. Dash hates flowercrowns and other girls stuff. Whatta tomboy
 
Bottom two: And this is the present. RD and AJ often “flirts” with each other. Y’know. Like a friend. Nothing serious. But Flutters is hella worried that is may turn out in something serious…
 
Phew, finally I can now go to sleep with a clear conscience yay  
Oh, and MLP belongs to Hasbro and blah blah blah

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Jade Shine - Derpi Supporter
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
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My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Friendship, Art, and Magic (2020) - Took part in the 2020 Community Collab
Charitable Contributor - Contributed to a series of art packs that helped raise over $10,000 for charity
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Friendship, Art, and Magic (2019) - Celebrated Derpibooru's seventh year anniversary with friends.
Chaotic Little Trees - 1000+ images under their artist tag
Silver Bit -

No really, what is it?
In the first panel, don’t number your text. The reading order of the text should always be the same as people expect by reading a normal book. It should always go top-left to bottom-right. If the text isn’t in an expected order (like it is here) then people will lose investment in the story and start thinking about the technical aspects of the comic.
 
I like the way you coloured the text to make it obvious who each line belongs to, but the order of them is non-intuitive and mixed up.