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Champions of Equestria

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Description

“Superhero team always have some combination powerful final strike move that able to deal a huge damage to weak enemy just to finish them off in cool style.”
 

 
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story. (Except how CMC got their cutie mark. They have canon one)
 
Warning : This story’s an alternate universe and is really crazy as hell. It crazy until crazy word isn’t fit it anymore. It’s become chaos now…
 
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with “To Love God - To Love Mortal” and “To Love Alicorn” but in the future and more crazy. And a continue story of “Crazy Future”
 
Warning : Don’t take this story too serious or you might get headache from overthinking….
 
Warning : Few number of love(Comments) might make comic page take long time to complete…
 

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Background Pony #8B38
Why the heck is Applejack suddenly as big as nightmare Rarity? We getting a scaling problem?
Steel
Non-Fungible Trixie -
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Magical Inkwell - Wrote MLP fanfiction consisting of at least around 1.5k words, and has a verified link to the platform of their choice

Writer, Flaripie Shipper
@Background Pony #DB6E  
Yes, I can see how it’s meant to work. The problem is not in the presentation, but just how unbelievable that is. This spell makes the sword travel at high speeds, and alters it’s trajectory every time it hits an element. It somehow steers around obstacles, and can hit a moving target exceeding mach one. And at the end of it all, it hit Rarity in her crescent valley despite the fact that originally our caster was facing Rarity.
 
con·triv·ance  
kənˈtrīvəns/  
noun  
noun: contrivance
 
a device, especially in literary or artistic composition, that gives a sense of artificiality.
 
I am left shaking my head asking ‘how?’
Background Pony #6145
@Steel  
I never saw it as trick shots, it seemed pretty obvious the sword was homing to each of the elements and then returning back to the one who sent it off, who then proceeded to fling it at Nightmarity’s exposed weak spot (perhaps with another homing spell to make sure it went in).
Steel
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Wallet After Summer Sale -
Magical Inkwell - Wrote MLP fanfiction consisting of at least around 1.5k words, and has a verified link to the platform of their choice

Writer, Flaripie Shipper
@thps48  
Nah, I’ve read it. The problem is that you seem to be saying that the writers of FiM having an inability to keep a consistent system makes it okay to pull out any old bullshit and have it be believable in a work of fanart. And you’re wrong, because while FiM has shown many potential ways for magic to work, it’s at least consistent within each episode. Each of those writers makes shit up, but they stick to what they made up, and it makes some sense within its own context.
 
This expects me to believe magic can do finely calculated trick shots and somehow come out at the end traveling at just the right angle to go right up the cooter. I can believe Twilight lifting a bear. I can buy her altering the destinies and memories of her friends. I can even buy that a table can make closed time loops. This, nonsense up there strains my credibility beyond that. Do you get me now?
Steel
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Wallet After Summer Sale -
Magical Inkwell - Wrote MLP fanfiction consisting of at least around 1.5k words, and has a verified link to the platform of their choice

Writer, Flaripie Shipper
@Spiritus Arcane In the end, fiction always follows its own rules, but it’s more believable when it has some degree of consistency. This isn’t even trying.
 
“It crazy until crazy word isn’t fit it anymore. It’s become chaos now…”
 
I think we need a new word for this setting. Chaos doesn’t do it justice.
Spiritus Arcane
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@Steel @Meanlucario  
I used magic missile as an example. Obviously what was used was something much more advanced. Chain lightning, for another example, is perfectly capable of bouncing between multiple targets depending on caster level. And yes, different world, different magic rules…and Equestria’s magic rules usually fall under ‘magic does whatever the plot says it does.’ Especially when it comes to stuff like the Elements.
Meanlucario
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Time to get spooky
@Spiritus Arcane  
There’s a difference between a magical arrow (that what I figured these things looked like) and a wooden object bouncing off everything. Also, different universes, different rules for magic.
Spiritus Arcane
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Not a Llama - Happy April Fools Day!
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

@Steel  
Dude, level one D&D/Pathfinder spell Magic Missile: a basic attack spell that hits whatever it’s pointed at, no attack roll needed, no chance to dodge, which means it can track its target to ensure the hit. Is it that far fetched to believe that a far more advanced spell could be put on an object, especially one like the sword which is already connected to harmony, to bounce it off the other elements to soak up power before attacking Rarity?
 
That it hit her in the cooch is the only thing really silly about it.
Steel
Non-Fungible Trixie -
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Magical Inkwell - Wrote MLP fanfiction consisting of at least around 1.5k words, and has a verified link to the platform of their choice

Writer, Flaripie Shipper
@thps48  
I’m just talking about the calculations necessary to somehow make that shot. The unicorn used a spell to fire this thing off like a bullet, okay, fine, but unless they were somehow guiding it into the elements (which were never ever blocked by environment, there was apparently a direct line of sight shot to the next) without being able to see the elements… there are so many variables here I can’t even explain how lubricious this is. Magic has rules, of a sort. This is not magic, it’s just silly.
Steel
Non-Fungible Trixie -
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Magical Inkwell - Wrote MLP fanfiction consisting of at least around 1.5k words, and has a verified link to the platform of their choice

Writer, Flaripie Shipper
@Spiritus Arcane  
A spell… that made a sword fly in a ricochet to all five elements, who were in motion (in the case of one, at faster than sound speed) then somehow hit Rarity in the plot.
 
No, you’re right, that’s not contrived, that’s laughably impossible. That’s more miraculous than actual miracles. That’s Starlight Glimmer level bullshit.