Fanfic Writing General

@Psyga315
 
Well, no offense, but binging on cookies seems pretty silly, even in a show full of magical horses. Of course, that isn’t to say it won’t work: you’ll just have to work extra hard to make it not sound weird.

@And Brother I Hurt People  
Alright, I guess I’ll be a little less subtle with what I mean.
 
Basically it’s a prequel to Bittersweet, a story where Pinkie dies of diabetes… Yeah, that’s apparently what happened in that story in a show about magical horses. Sort of does sound silly when you think about it, especially if they can magically cure something like that. This story I’m thinking of might explore some different routes, especially since in one episode, the lack of Pinkie Pie was enough to get the town to squabble amongst themselves.

@Psyga315
 
Alright, I get it now.

I was wondering if anyone could look over this latest chapter of myfic, I feel I’m writing a tad clumsy here.  
password is noway

@PonyPon  
I’ll give it a look.

@PonyPon  
Ok, after looking over it I think what you’ve got looks pretty solid. I did spot some typos and a few phrases that seemed a bit over written, but overall pretty damn good if you ask me.

On a non-fanfiction related note, is anyone doing Nanowrimo this year? If you haven’t started, they always allow erotica as a section, so write porn to your heart’s content.
 
Or, you know, write something else.

If a character does something you dislike, where is the line between blaming the character for it and blaming the writer?

depends how out of character it is.

@And Brother I Hurt People  
Huh. I thought that was October.

Uncle Cthulhu comes to town.
 
Pinkie’s uncle comes to stay for the week. He also happens to be a massive, mind-breaking, squid-man-thing. The ponies ofcourse freak out, though he proves to constantly be harmless when around his family, and hold no ill will towards ponies (monkeys and humans on the other hand…)

@Princess♠Molestia  

 
I do like that idea. Twilight is walking through the park when she sees Pinkie apparently with her head in a hole…the hole is hovering in mid-air. Even stranger, Pinkie is “speaking” to something inside this hole in reality, and it’s not normal speech either, it’s an odd sort of screeching, squelching noise, like rubbing nail-embedded meat against a chalkboard.
 
Twilight: Pinkie…what are you doing?  
Pinkie: Oh, hiya Twilight! Just talking to a friend of mine. He’s kinda shy, though, doesn’t like meeting new ponies, which is a little silly, I mean, meeting new ponies is the greatest thing ever!

Pinkie sees Mrs. Cake breastfeeding the twins, and makes a wish that she could too.  
The next day she wakes up and finds her tits are full of milk. Chocolate and Strawberry, that is, in a endless supply.

@Shadow Star  
That sounds like a concept I could have a lot of fun with, mind if I steal it?

long as you gimmie credit, go ahead.

@gasmaskangel
 
What are you planning to do with that?

@And Brother I Hurt People  
Terrible things. I was thinking of subverting the usual “be careful what you wish for!” storyline, go for a kind of story book style narration that gets more and more annoyed with things not going as expected. I haven’t really worked out the details yet.

@gasmaskangel
 
Ah, sounds good.

which is the same thing I was shooting for. With Discord as the ‘Literal Genie’

Shining Armor vs Candence in heat.

@Background Pony  
My money’s on Cadance.

well I was gonna add a evil twist- he escapes Cadence thanks to Twilight- who also is in heat.

And then Celestia was in heat too?

…. no its a twist ending. Shining breathes a sigh of relief to get away from Cadence.. and then realizes Twilight has locked herself in the safe room with him. Then he notices the smell..  
aand cue the screaming as fade to black.

@Shadow Star  

 
Blargh, (implied?) incest. No thanks.